Second addition. "Emu ~ For My Dear ~" by Himu Kimu. I like this! I just read it now. It was posted in the YnM ML Nov 2000, and it was reposted in the YnM Fanfic ML. The latter ml is the largest archive thus far of YnM fanfics. Use the search engine in egroups to locate the fanfic in the YnM ML. It will be much easier to find in the YnM Fanfic ML.
The first few paragraphs centered on an original character. I had to forced myself to read every word. The difficulty is not due to the author's skill with words. Himu Kimu writes very well. I just don't think it's a good idea to start a "fanfic" with an original character, even if the character is not a Mary Sue or a Michael John.
The fic gets much better. Here's an excerpt.
~~~ Reaching out with a slender arm, she drew the huddled figure into her arms in a protective embrace. The figure continued to snore softly, like a tiny kitten taking its nap after a bowl of sugared milk. Ruka looked at her brother, who slept peacefully in her lap, and smiled wistfully. "Why can I not be asleep as blissfully as Asato-chan?" ~~~
Finally! I read a YnM fic with Ruka in it! Not much has been said of Tsuzuki's sister officially, but I believe she is very important. She may even have contributed to the reason why Tsuzuki was hospitalized. It is very likely, and I like fanfics which includes and concentrates on the YnM female cast.
Only a prologue written... More please!!!
The first few paragraphs centered on an original character. I had to forced myself to read every word. The difficulty is not due to the author's skill with words. Himu Kimu writes very well. I just don't think it's a good idea to start a "fanfic" with an original character, even if the character is not a Mary Sue or a Michael John.
The fic gets much better. Here's an excerpt.
~~~ Reaching out with a slender arm, she drew the huddled figure into her arms in a protective embrace. The figure continued to snore softly, like a tiny kitten taking its nap after a bowl of sugared milk. Ruka looked at her brother, who slept peacefully in her lap, and smiled wistfully. "Why can I not be asleep as blissfully as Asato-chan?" ~~~
Finally! I read a YnM fic with Ruka in it! Not much has been said of Tsuzuki's sister officially, but I believe she is very important. She may even have contributed to the reason why Tsuzuki was hospitalized. It is very likely, and I like fanfics which includes and concentrates on the YnM female cast.
Only a prologue written... More please!!!
